Embarked on a journey
I wandered in the deserts
In search of my love
That kept eluding me
Like a mirage of an oasis
From the narrow lanes
To the vast sun risers
I traversed them all
In search of my love
That had gone missing somewhere
From gardens to orchards
I traveled them all
In search of that scent
In search of that beautiful flower
Which was mine
But destiny as it seems
Is playing its cruel game with me
But I continue to hope
Once in my life
Of finding, If not you,
The shadow of your smile….
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Love and longing…a master combi! Nice one 🙂
thank you 🙂
so much for love and longing that an entire journey too isn’t enough. lovely poem
Thks kalpana (:
Nice deluge of discovering someone.
Beautifully expressed!
Thks sheetal (:
Love can be a heart ache sometimes…
Beautifully written.
Hopped over from Write Tribe and I’m glad I did!
@Pixie, true that is the case sometimes.. glad that u liked it (:
Oh so painful! Hope you find it soon ! 🙂
@Bhavya, Its just a figment of my imagination.. (:
aah ! so much love . with this much love not only smile but the whole person will be yours 😉
good one
thks afshan..
Ah! The aches and the pains of love. Very beautifully expressed. 🙂
thks shilpa
hey Kumar, seeker of love and beautiful poem. I love the end in search of love:)
Cheerz
Vishal
thks vishal..
The search for true love very beautifully depicted. Sometimes when we search too hard, we fail to see. Thanks for writing on my prompt. I enjoyed your take on it.
Thks suzy (:
This is a wonderful poem. True love can wait endlessly for the loved one!! Great expression.,Rohit.
Thk you @menons129
sensitivity…and so courteous even in pain – you will find the best, cuz you are
thks 🙂